WALT: Write a persuasive text
What I Found Easy: writing
What I Found Difficult: Coming up Ideas to argue cell phone should be banned
What I enjoyed: Fixing my mistakes (I think there's more)
What I Should do to improve next time: fixing my sentence and my grammar also checking
if it makes sense.
Should cellphone be banned from school?
In my Belief cell phones shouldn't be banned from school,
because it has pieces of information that give to you and everybody
around the world and it is quite helpful.
because it has pieces of information that give to you and everybody
around the world and it is quite helpful.
Having a phone is excellent, so you're given privileges. When you're
escorting yourself to school; you can have access to the media during
class, until you have pieces of information. Also, you can write down
notes onto your phone instead of writing into the book rather than just
copying it onto the device afterwards.
escorting yourself to school; you can have access to the media during
class, until you have pieces of information. Also, you can write down
notes onto your phone instead of writing into the book rather than just
copying it onto the device afterwards.
A phone is a responsibility because students are responsible enough to
take care of their items and should be aware of not cheating in class
because it can affect their learning. Phones can teach the role of
responsibility to students. Teachers and administrators should allow phones;
occasionally students don't understand the topic teachers talk about so they
find the information, so using a phone which can be helpful at times.
take care of their items and should be aware of not cheating in class
because it can affect their learning. Phones can teach the role of
responsibility to students. Teachers and administrators should allow phones;
occasionally students don't understand the topic teachers talk about so they
find the information, so using a phone which can be helpful at times.
A phone can be a reliable and a useful matter because you will never know
if a dangerous situation arises like a school shooting if no cell phone were
allowed parents do and they lose the sense of protecting their child/children.
Some people walk to the school and also if they bus to school and parents
sometimes need to know if they are coming home safely if phones weren’t
allowed on school property their phones are at home not in their pockets.
if a dangerous situation arises like a school shooting if no cell phone were
allowed parents do and they lose the sense of protecting their child/children.
Some people walk to the school and also if they bus to school and parents
sometimes need to know if they are coming home safely if phones weren’t
allowed on school property their phones are at home not in their pockets.
In conclusion cell phones shouldn’t be banned from school because people
need to know if their child is safe for a situation that might occur. Also,
they get smarter every time they go on the media because they gather pieces
of information. It can also teach responsibility to take care of a phone and how
they are used appropriately for school.
need to know if their child is safe for a situation that might occur. Also,
they get smarter every time they go on the media because they gather pieces
of information. It can also teach responsibility to take care of a phone and how
they are used appropriately for school.
hii Neil,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed ready your persuasive writing about how phone SHOULD be banned. I liked how you have use lots of facts to help back up your opinion why phones should be banned.Maybe next time you could use some complex sentences