post I made a pick a path story. see where your option take you.. What i found difficult : was making organising the paths What I found easy : Was Making the descriptions What I should fo to improve nex time : Is Making more endings.
Hey Niel, It's great that your story has a moral! maybe next time you can add more endings? but it looks like you knew you could put more ending in, that's great. Keep up the great work Niel.
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Hey Niel,
ReplyDeleteIt's great that your story has a moral! maybe next time you can add more endings? but it looks like you knew you could put more ending in, that's great. Keep up the great work Niel.