kudyapi - topic

for the past week we have been learning about a country right now were studying about tonga as a whole class together, miss wilton tried making nose flutes but it didn't work out well so we're doing something else different. As a class we all went away and did a country and discover a instrument and which I did here, the kudyapi.

The key To Happiness and freedom - writing

The Key To Happiness and freedom

Hello for the past few day we have been planning and writing a story it's about a key so we made a fictional
story about a key and what are we going to do a with it in the story my one is about this person who his lonely and antisocial
person who had a troubled past, as in like being bullied constantly and his life back then and now but he's going to change
that with a key. but he's got to go through something though.

Suddenly darkness filled up my room swallowing it piece by piece I was terrified I couldn't find the door but it already got me I was shivering it was like outside on snow without any warm clothing I began to run an abyss, feeling weak and tired I looked around once more, a child? chained, it was on his wrist I walked over to him and said “ are you stuck here?” he nodded and questioned him again “how did you get this chain on you?” he shrugged. The light faded above his head, children were playing he was on the table drawing, all of them looked at his artwork making a disgusted face then they walked away. Two sentences flew around him “You aren’t talented” “you’re not good enough” then it went inside his head I called out to him he didn’t answer I touched him but he jerked himself away,  it suddenly got colder.

I blinked he disappeared I looked around panicking and in distress something was far away I ran to it I came to… him, he looked like me when I was teenager he had more chains than the other child, he said to me “why-why...why do they treat me like a jerk TELL ME!" to do I look like I can hold my self-esteem any longer why do I have to be so antisocial!?” suddenly a bright light appeared over his head, people? It was high school people pushed him around it looked like he was bullied countless of times, he was like me back then, the light suddenly disappeared, words appeared like “you look ugly” “what's up with those pimples” “new nerd” “nerds wear glass”, I told him “NO DON’T LET YOURSELF BE OVERCOME THOSE WORDS, THEY ARE JUST WORD IGNORE THEM DON’T LET YOURSELF DOWN BECAUSE I KNOW IT'S UNFAIR BUT LATER IN THE FUTURE YOU’RE GOING TO HAVE  A GOOD LIFE!” he looked at me and smirked “no I'm not” the words dug into him like they were sharp knives “NOOO!” I said I fell onto my knees speechless. But his body did not disappear.

He looked up, and he looked like me but chains were me over him his wrist, legs, neck, arms, I looked like I was almost finished as in like going to give on life and disappear no I can’t let that happen to myself I.. I realise that the child and that teenager were me, all of those things happened and I let myself down because of that and that's why I'm stuck.. Stuck in my own world empty and dark, bright light faded in above the head of me, those memories will be stuck in my head and it cannot be erased but what I can do is change myself and stop being an antisocial freak who let everybody down and myself because being a psycho doesn't matter because I'm going to let myself shine, words appeared around me “no you are a loner” “your so anti who would want a freak like you” “ew look at him” I shouted “NO! I'M NOT A LONELY PERSON BECAUSE I KNEW THAT IT WAS MY DESIRE TO STAY IN MY ROOM, I CAN CHANGE AND MAKE FRIENDS, I LOOK BEAUTIFUL IN THE INSIDE NOT THE OUTSIDE!” each of those words disappeared as made a comment in each in one of them.

I sat down and sighed I looked at myself and smiled he handed a key and said “you can unchain me and stay in this void forever or leave by that door there” he handed me a key that unlocks a key padlock or the door lock, the door exploded in making an entry particles slowly drift down wow it was like fireworks, I chose to unlock myself he said to me “why? Why did you choose to let go of me?” he answered back “because I want to free myself from this abyss and not leave anybody including me... Me” he said to me “give me the key” I questioned “wait I thought you said if I use this key I stay here?” he proclaimed “yes I did but let's get out of here”.

I opened the door it was so bright it was almost blinding, everything was quiet I’m outside my room where’s me I looked around the house to find the other me he was nowhere to be seen, I realised that is free. Free from myself and my bedroom and I'm ready to get out and meet the world, I grabbed my car keys I looked at it, I smiled. I said wow “it’s the same key”.

  

The moral

Never let anybody bring you down with their nasty words and go out and make friends

if you see any mistake please comment down below so I can make improvement to this story because i'll love it

even sentences you can't understand please again tell me down below (comments) so I can make room for improvement when I make a another story.

Ps: This is fiction means not reals its made up