In school we're doing our inquires which i'm doing, well i am studying about child poverty, child soldiers and labor.
what i found hard: finding the info that i wanted
what i found easy: doing the slide of course
what should i do next time: work hard and get noticed more
Hi Niel,
ReplyDeleteI am E-mazed at your inquiry, I have learnt lots of new things about "A difficult life for children". You have done really well with this inquiry. For your inquiry there are somethings that you have done really well and you have targeted and there are some things you could have a look back and fix up, to make your inquiry even better. Some of the things you could fix up are capitals after a full stop, spelling and grammar, add more facts maybe 10 or more so that you can be a 3 star,re read your work to make sure it makes sense and some of the things I really like were you added in pictures so that the person could have a look to see what it looks like when your there and I loved how at the end of your presentation you wrapped it up by putting "So what did we learn from all this?"
Keep up the great work Niel.
Hi Siobhan,
DeleteI was also E-mazed at your comment, and thank you for commenting as well. You put all of your effort into telling me what should I do next time. I will improve more thanks to your kind comment
I will fix up all the mistake next time, thank you
kind regard Nie