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In the darkened night, as figures
crawl into the forest.
As a man gets startled by a white and gloomy eye,
as The wind gets louder and louder
.The man ran as he stomps on the leafs,
Making crunchy noises.
Something caught his eye, a cabin. He stumbled
Inside groaning tiredly, but just in a brief moment a
Sound roared into the distance as it got closer and closer.The man held his breath not making a single sound. Silents occurred, then the man dozed off into the the cold and bitter night.
What i liked doing this, I like making this because I love writing
what should I do next to improve, keeping moving on as in keep doing my best
What i liked doing this, I like making this because I love writing
what should I do next to improve, keeping moving on as in keep doing my best